
Falling Away
We had our spring
When everything was fresh and new and blooming.
As summer arrived
Every day was longer and the heat of discord stronger.
As fall approached
Everything burst with the bold colors of possibility.
But winter was coming
The barriers between us foreshadowed the abscission to come.
Suddenly over
We each fell away, severed from one life, one dream, one ideal.
Winter was here
Cold and dark
And temporary.
Spring was coming with sprigs of possibility in her hair.
Written as part of Linda Hill’s JusJoJan.
Prompt word today (abscission) submitted by Lakshmi from Mukhamani.
What a wonderful poem Maggie.
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So kind of you to say, Sadje.
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I love the symbolism with life. You’re welcome
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Thank you. That means a lot coming from you, Sadje.
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You’re always welcome my friend
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❤️
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👍🏼
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That word was new to me and I think you used it creatively to perfectly capture how it has been lately.
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It was new to me, as well. I appreciate your comments so much, Elizabeth.
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Thanks Maggie.
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I like your poem a lot, but Spring still feels a long way off, here in Beeley.
Best wishes, Pete.
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But it is ever on the horizon, Pete.
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Well done, Maggie.
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Dan, thank you. I appreciate the comment.
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Very nice!
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Thank you, Lisa.
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What an amazing eloquent poem. I feel the change of seasons moving wirh life changes.
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Thank you, Lauren.
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Spring comes again and again…. with sprigs of possibility in her hair. Reminds me of when I traipse around the woods or my backyard and come in with little sprigs in my hair. Thank you for this hopeful poem.
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I am so touched that you found hope in this piece. And I love that you get sprigs in your hair!
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