This is my first time participating in the Sunday Writing Prompt hosted by MindLoveMisery’s Menagerie. Today’s prompt is shape-shifter.
The Rules:
The style is completely open; poetry, prose, even a single sentence…Go where the prompt takes YOU!
Keep your submission to 500 words or less.
Post it on your page, and TAG it Sunday Writing Prompt, SWP, MLMM, Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie. And be sure to leave a link or pingback in the comment section below.
Feel free to use my photo for inspiration, or as your own cover image.
Please have your submissions in by the END OF EACH FRIDAY (Pacific Standard Time). Every Saturday, I will post a “standout” piece in a post entitled, SATURDAY SPOTLIGHT. Bear in mind, it will be based on my personal opinion. If you are not chosen, that does NOT mean your piece was not superb.
My fate was sealed before I was born. A bundle of sage swirled above my mothers head as the elders marked her protruding belly with charcoal from the fire. They held her head back as she choked down the potion that would hasten my arrival. Disease had taken all but of a few of the elders. When the protector succumbed to the fever, he was kneeling at my mothers feet – a sign her child would absorb the magic of the ages, but only if the birth happened before the next rising of the moon. I witnessed it all. It was my only memory of my mother. I would always remember the desperation of her last breath as I saw my first light. They say it was love, but I feared I was destined to never experience love again.
I was taken into the wilderness as a baby, left alone on a blanket to test my power. It was the first time I heard the animals speak. The panther considered eating me, pacing around the blanket for hours. He suspected a trap and taunted me by scraping a paw across my forehead. I did not cry, nor did I bleed. I felt the power of the panther seep into me as the panther backed away. By morning, I was no longer a member of the tribe. I was every creature of the forest and carried the mark of the panther from that day forward.
This life was lonely, full of responsibility for the tribe. I slept while fully awake, each part of me taking its turn guiding my body. I was a manchild the first time I transformed. A deadly rattlesnake found its way into the camp headed for the tent of the chief. Without a thought I felt myself rise and fall with the silent wings of the red tailed hawk until I had the snake in my claws. This was the reason for my mother’s sacrifice.
During the full moon I could sense my mother’s presence, her hair long and dark, her body strong now. It was her spirit that protected me, but it did not quell the deep loneliness I felt. She told me that during the coming moon, I must claim a wife and have a child. If I did not, another child would be taken from his mother as I had been. Her tears filled the sky and fell like arrows to the ground.
At the next full moon, I took a wife. I shared her bed and felt human touch for the first time. Within months our son would be born to a mother and a father. He would not lie alone in the forest as I had. I would teach him. He would know love.
Reblogged this on beetleypete and commented:
I just had to reblog this captivating short story from Maggie. Great to read something so original and inventive.
What a fascinating and powerful story! You shared a great deal with relatively few words: history, emotion, purpose, strength…. I am glad he could sense my mother’s presence and was protected by her spirit. Love the ending.
What an amazing story Maggie. I really enjoyed reading it.
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Thank you for reading, Sadje. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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It’s a pleasure
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I love this, Maggie. So original and well-written, I felt I was there.
Going to reblog it on my site today.
Best wishes, Pete.
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That is certainly high praise coming from you, Pete. Thank you for reading and I am touched you felt it worthy of reblogging.
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Reblogged this on beetleypete and commented:
I just had to reblog this captivating short story from Maggie. Great to read something so original and inventive.
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Thank you so much, Pete. This means a lot.
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Nice story.
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Thank you for taking the time to read.
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SO different! Loved it.
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and value the feedback.
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Awesome story! [applause]
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Thank you, Susan. I appreciate you reading and commenting.
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What a fantastic and creative story!! Thank you so much for participating 🙂
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Thank you for your kind words. It was an enjoyable story to write, I enjoyed participating.
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I am so happy you did, Maggie 🙂
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Maggie your story was terrific. What a wonderful reentry into blogging.
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Thank you, Lauren.
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What a fascinating and powerful story! You shared a great deal with relatively few words: history, emotion, purpose, strength…. I am glad he could sense my mother’s presence and was protected by her spirit. Love the ending.
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Joanna. It was a fun piece to write..
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Fantastic Maggie and well deserved for Sara’s Spotlight! A brilliant read.
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Thank you, Di. I am honored!
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You are most welcome!
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Thank you, again.
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Shapeshifter ….. by Maggie
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Thank you for the reblog.
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You are welcome!
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